Audio Feedback

After the first rough cut edit of the sound we presented to our tutor. When playing it in front fo people and on the speaker system we realised as well as been informed of problems with our edit. Problems with the edit were:

Clarity- the dynamic human sounds were not clear at all

Layers- Not enough layers in the audio to create sense of space

Build up- Needed a greater sense of build up, to take the audience with the story

Fish- the sounds sounded scary and mysterious  they needed to sound more like an aquatic environment and to introduce the fish better.